Round 35, Hour 15
Nov. 24th, 2012 02:13 pmThere seems to be some slight confusion over who's posting this hour (business as usual!), so since I'm here, I am.
How is going fic_rushers? Words written/edited? Things eaten/ironed?
I am off to get some rest now (no words for me but these), but I'm sure someone else will turn up to be Wonderful and Modly very shortly.
How is going fic_rushers? Words written/edited? Things eaten/ironed?
I am off to get some rest now (no words for me but these), but I'm sure someone else will turn up to be Wonderful and Modly very shortly.
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Date: 2012-11-24 02:22 pm (UTC)So I just add feels until the characters (or readers) are a gooey sappy mess? Is that it? Am I close?
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Date: 2012-11-24 03:01 pm (UTC)By 'romantic', do you mean UST? Or flirting? Or wroking up to Hot and Heavy? Or something else?
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Date: 2012-11-24 03:37 pm (UTC)I mean 'they kissed', easy, but you know. Two words. I'm sure I need more words for a scene :D
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Date: 2012-11-24 03:53 pm (UTC)Can you focus on the non-standard senses? How the room smells, or the other person's hair? How the fabric feels on the other person's back? Any outside sounds that they might noticed if they were listening? I'm very fond of using impressions and ambience to spice up a scene that might be trite otherwise.
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Date: 2012-11-24 04:06 pm (UTC)I suppose the best way to write this is just experiment with different approaches, nothing to lose :) thanks for the tips!
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Date: 2012-11-24 04:40 pm (UTC)I tend to get frozen with embarrassment like a rabbit in the headlights when it comes to such things, so you have my sympathy.
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Date: 2012-11-24 02:30 pm (UTC)And Glinda never showed up at all. Argh. I hope she's okay!
ETA: This is actually Hour 15.
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Date: 2012-11-24 04:36 pm (UTC)I've edited the post to be Hour 15. I was off for my rest and got back up just now and thought: "I put Hour 13! I'm still counting down!" (My head got v muddly yesterday and today. I'm amazed my maths yesterday was right.)
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