Round 37, Hour 21

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In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was...

Write, my pretties, write!

Technically, that's 4 words (3?) but we'll pretend it's one. Maybe it should have been "sentence".

Anyway, to hell with writing, there's sunshine outside.

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[sid]

The Muse did visit me while I was washing the dishes. She said, "Innertube!"

And I said, "Oops!" (You had to be there.)

Anyway, that led to some editing in aid of continuity, a bright idea that needed some research, and some resulting period flavor.

A net increase of 14 words, and a better story. I guess that's a win? :-)

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It IS a win! 14 words are only the beginning. Next - taking over the penguin.

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Yeah. For a comm that's meant to get you to write, we are awfully good at distracting people :D