Date: 2009-07-12 01:33 pm (UTC)
infiniteviking: A liger sticking its tongue out. (11)
From: [personal profile] infiniteviking
Dialogue trouble. Too many characters = too many character identifiers for one paragraph, and it's an action scene, so there's adjectives going on too.

On the other hand, 415 new words! :)

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