I got another couple hundred words. I'm going to have to go over the whole thing later just to make sure it's all as visceral as I want it to be. AUGH. I hate editing!
...ice cream. And then I guess I flip a coin to decide whether to add more detail where my beta wanted or just delete that whole scene, problem solved.
Ah yes, I've been in that position before. "How do I make this scene better?! Oh, delete it? But-- Oh. Oh, yes. Yes, the story's much better now." Almost as good as editing that page full of prose down to one word. Yes.
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