Round 94, Hour 4

[xandromedovna]

Ughhhh, how do I make them have the same fight twice without it feeling like the same fight twice?

Writing is hard, let me know if you've had more success than I am.

Comments

[taichara]

Change up the details of the fight! 83 That's what I do -- even if it's the same fight, the bodies involved will probably move differently ~


I cleaned up(ish) my Camp NaNo novella last night but apparently I can't validate the wordcount from work because Google docs hates me (_ )_ So, in the morning ...

Now for working on some stuff for a Shadowrun Anarchy campaign and maybe some fic planning for Gundam Wing or YST --

[xandromedovna]

haha makes sense, I think I'm realizing I just don't know this character well enough yet and that's why it's feeling one-note

Google Docs... why do you hate us?

[taichara]

You can do it ~


Admittedly I mostly use doc's as a storage tank, it's probably shirty at me lol

[elasticella]

I def agree with changing up the details of the fight- like the surroundings and feelings, and even a character thinking about how it mirrors an earlier fight yknow? You got this \o/

I quasi-finished one ficlet and started a bigger one lol, so this is a good stopping place for the night. Toodles! ^.^

[xandromedovna]

ooo, I like that, having them comment on it, actually the way the characters are set up it might be a good way to show the stress of the situation because they HAVE to have to same fight twice. Thanks everyone!!

well done, sweet dreams!