Round 83, Hour 23

[naemi.livejournal.com]

Where did this day go? I meant to do so much and managed so little … Has anyone out there words to report? =)

Comments

[ylla.livejournal.com]

I'm the same, really - but I have been dancing, which is quite an achievement considering how I felt this morning!

[naemi.livejournal.com]

That's quite something! =)

[http://users.livejournal.com/idlewild_/]

I added an opening sentence or two to make my story start slightly less in media res. Whee!

[naemi.livejournal.com]

Very nice! Keep up the good work =)

[ylla.livejournal.com]

What would you want to do that for? ;-)

[http://users.livejournal.com/idlewild_/]

Hah... That's a good question. We'll see where it all ends up in the final draft.